New York City should be the only place to promote and sell Obama’s new deodorant item (Persuasive writing)

Hello there,this is my new persuasive writing.Like last time I did it with a animal/person,thing/object and lastly setting/place. This time I got Obama,Deodorant and New York. Just to clarify none of this is to make anyone feel bad, it is more for entertainment and for me to learn on how to write them. Another thing is that the scientific facts and studies are 100% FAKE and I made them up and that Obama isn't releasing a deodorant, even though we wish he could.So hopefully you can enjoy this and remember to STAY SAFE!

Animal/Name:Obama

Thing/Object:Deodorant 

Setting/Place:New York 

Statement:

New York City should be the only place to promote and sell Obama’s new deodorant item

Ideas for the paragraphs:

Paragraph 1:New York city has lots of ways on how to promote it and lots of ways to sell it 

Paragraph 2: What would happen if they allow other places to promote and sell it 

Paragraph 3: What the product could do to those that live in New York

As we all know, deodorant is one of life's most important things. It helps us smell nice under our armpits even if we sweat. Even though deodorant is a world wide thing.There is one particular place where they sell and promote the best deodorant. That place is New York City. As you may have heard on the news Obama is releasing his own DEODORANT! Since Obama is releasing his own deodorant New York City should be the only place to sell and promote it. Yes, I know this sounds bizarre, but I came up with 3 reasons and maybe by the end of you reading this you will agree. 

One big reason is because The Big Apple (NYC) has many ways to promote and sell it. Everyone knows that New York has 2 big TV stations. Which are WNBC and WNET. Not only that but New York has many resources in the marketing business as well. New York also has crazy but awesome ways on how to promote it. One time New York made headlines for promoting a small business in the air. They had a big mobile in the air like they do in the movies. They also have some unique ways to sell them. They would deliver things from drones. One time they just made purses in the rain in New York. Even though New York is in the US. You can ship it to where you live. Not only that, but there are some other options as well. One of them being a hot air balloon, but if we don’t let New York do it then it would just be plain. Which leads me up to the next reason. 

If we allow other countries to promote and sell Obamas new deodorant, then we’d be in trouble. You see other places such as the UK,Australia and New Zealand decrease the price of things. In those sorts of countries they judge the product on how it looks and would add some more expensive things to bring the original price up. One of the reasons they put it higher is when things sell out they can use that money to purchase more than regulars would. They would also use some of the extra money towards other things. Now this may sound strange and it is, but if we let other countries sell and promote it they would make it look as if Obama wanted people to not use it. You see, some countries don't like Obama, but would only want to sell his product because some people in their country love him.Also they would only promote it because it's deodorant, not because it's Obama’s.  So you see if we allow other countries to promote and sell it, the deodorant and Obama would be in Jeopardy.

Finally my last reason. Scientists have proven that New York has 43.856% more construction workers than any other country does. As we all know construction work causes a bunch of sweat, especially under the pits. If they allow just New York to sell and promote it, then construction workers can have an unlimited amount of the deodorant. Not just that, but there have been some articles saying that New York might just be the most if not the only place that has a stench. Now I know this may seem harsh, but if Obama can promote and sell his deodorant there, it would help many people's lives there to smell fantastic.

So in conclusion New York should be the only place to sell and promote Obama’s upcoming DEODORANT. If they are the only place to sell and promote, then next time you go to NYC just see if it smells good. I really hope that this moved you and now you agree. If you don't, that's totally fine.