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Monday, 31 May 2021

PYRAMIDS NOTE TAKING!

This is my note taking about the pyramids. I haven't done the writing part yet, but be on the look out. Anyway  this week we will be learning about the pyramids. I hope you enjoy this note taking. Remember to be on the lookout for the writing. ENJOY! 

 
   
  

Pyramids 

The Pharaohs/rulers

Other buildings they made

The great pyramid giza

   -only survived one

   - largest one 

   -tallest man made  


More than 100 

   -very damage 

   -smaller

 

10-20 years to build 

   -pyramid 


2.3 million stones

   -weighted 25-80 metric tons 1 stone 

Kufo made his own 

   2 temples to honor him

   -3 small pyramids for his     wife

   -Son and grandson build some 

-3 pyramids built before satisfy 


Live like when dead

    -buried with things they need

    -buried in sand 

Head of a man body of a lion

     - sphinx

     - 73 meters long  


Flat tombs 

   -mustaba 

   -4000 half thousand year agos

     -stack of mastaba/step pyramid




  

Could be in the introduction

-Home richest and most powerful civilization 





Tuesday, 13 April 2021

Lost city under the ocean

 This is my narrative. We had to write a narrative based on a photo. The photo was about a cave, but I turned it into a lost city. I hope you enjoy it. 


A diver had just gone into the ocean. Not knowing much about that ocean. He would usually dive 500 feet into the ocean, but he decided to try and beat it. He wanted to go 700 feet. Just the past 2 week he had learnt how to switch tanks underwater. Now this may seem impossible, but he did it. As he was diving in he was holding two tanks with a clipper thing. When he got up to 700 feet he discovered a cave. He didn’t know that there was a cave under the sea. As he went closer he started to discover that there were some rocks that looked like buildings. Walking through the cave he started noticing that the cave was actually a lost city.


Shocked by what he just saw he quickly swimmed up to the surface. He was blapping random words and his assistant finally got him to calm down. Once the diver calmed down he said that he had found a lost city underwater. At first his assistant didn’t believe him, but when she saw him shaking she knew he wasn’t lying. The diver was so excited he knew he had just made history. Without thinking he went back under and his assistant was yelling out for him to come back up. The reason being was because he didn’t have enough oxygen and his tank was only ⅓ from almost being gone.


The diver was just 100 feet from the lost city. As soon as he got there his oxygen went out. Normally it would only take 10-20minutes for him to be under water. The assistant knew something was wrong. Without hesitation his assistant quickly jumped in the water two tanks on her back. Diving in she found him and quickly attached the other oxygen tank she had. As she looked up she noticed he wasn’t lying. As he was slowly waking up they went up and dialed the police. 


The police arrived and started to investigate. There weren’t enough tanks for them so they only went under and took photos of it.  After further investigation they found out that the cave was actually a lost city. Although they didn’t find out which city it was, the lost city became one of the worlds most visited places in the world.