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Friday 17 April 2020

Twisted tales of Layla, Goldilocks and the three bears

Twisted tales of Layla, Goldilocks and the three bears

It was Tuesday afternoon and the bears had made porridge, but the porridge was too hot at the time.So papa decided that the bears should go for a walk around the forest. While they were walking around Goldilocks and her friend Layla came to the house. At first Goldilocks was a bit scared because she didn’t know if the bears were going to like another person beside her come in the house, but when she knocked no one came to the door. Until Layla says that the front day is not locked. So without thinking they walked in and waited. It took the bears quite a long time, but they reached the house and opened the door and guess who they saw? Your right if you said Goldilocks and Layla. Mama bear asked Goldilocks who the other girl was and Goldilocks told all of them that it was her best friend.

Goldilocks went to the toilet and that is when Layla started to say mean stuff about the bears. She would say lots of mean things. Until Goldilocks came back and she knew nothing. This happened every time Goldilocks left the room. The bears didn’t want to tell Goldilocks because they thought that they wanted to get rid of Layla and take her spotlight. Goldilocks went to the kitchen and the things Layla said to them were disrespectful and that is when they told Goldilocks. They told her everything, but she said she wanted to see it herself. The bears came up with a great idea to show Layla Goldilocks her true colours.

So the plan was that Goldilocks forgot something in the baby bears room so she goes and gets it but all she does is stand on the corner of the living room but Layla doesn’t know. That is when everything happens and Goldilocks hears everything that she says to the bears. She almost started to cry. She walked back in the room and they all confronted Layla. She said that it was true but they were being mean to her first but Goldilocks didn’t listen. The bears kicked her out and banned her from the house. Goldilocks told Layla’s parents and Layla was grounded for making fun of people. Since then Goldilocks nor the bears have seen Layla.

Did you like my twisted version of Goldilocks? I have to admit that it is nowhere near like the real version. Which part did you like the best? My is the part that Layla gets in trouble and caught. This is my third twisted story. Which one is your favourite? I like them all. If you were to rewrite a fairytale which one would it be? I could choose.

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