Angelica @ Pt England School: Proofreading and editing

Friday 6 September 2019

Proofreading and editing

This is my writing task. It was about to take some old writing from this term and check it. I hope you can see the difference.

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About Me

Malo e lelei, my name is Angelica and I am a year 7 at Pt England school.This year my teacher is Mrs Stone and my literacy teacher is Mr Moran.

I like to do a lot of things but I do like to draw and write. I have also played netball since year 1 in a team which was named the angel, but now the Amazons. I do also like to read and one of my favourite books is Dawn Raid.

When I grow up I want to be a detective or a prosecution lawyer. The reason why is because I watch a lot of crimes on TV like NCIS and Criminal Minds. I do also enjoy Drake and Josh.

At home I have 3 siblings, one of which is now moved on to be in college. Things I like to do is having fun with my siblings.

At school I like to play softball. Last year I was also an ambassador for the school. This year my goals are to work on maths and reading.

I can't wait to see what comes next!

Angelica @ Pt England School

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Friday 6 September 2019

Proofreading and editing

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