My narrative about a bomb.

                          Narrative Writing


WALT use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.


Your task: This term’s inquiry is all about working well as a team. Create a narrative/story. In your story, a group of children have just received a letter in the mail:









Planning:


Characters:Leroy,Abby,Gibbs

Setting/ where: the fanciest Restaurant in Fraces

Problem:Gibbs finds out that there is a bomb in the building and they try to find it.

Resolution:Is that Abby finds that the bomb is under the chair.


Write your story here:


“We got some mail” yelled Gibbs. “ Since when was the last time we got mail” said Abby. “About a year ago” said Leroy”.”What a year ago” said Gibbs. “ I’ll get it” said Abby.As soon as Abby got the mail you could hardly see her face. “ I’ll help you Abby” said Gibbs.They digged out and found a letter from the prime minister saying that there is a dinner party at six o’clock tomorrow. “Oh I can’t wait I mean the prime minister coming to our Restaurant , it’s likes a dream come true” said Abby.


So she quickly started cooking her special meal, while Gibbs and Leroy were working on chop pork mixed with a hint of some potato dressing.With only Twenty two hours to go they started to make their own meals. Abby was working on making some ribs with some mashed potato.Gibbs was also working on making his homemade meal that he always cooks for his family.He called it the Gibbstoenarter that was made with chicken , peas, and the secret ingredient gravy.Leroy was working on something that would make the prime minister think that it is out of this world. The in ingredients that he needed was red peppers with Scrabble eggs and chopped up tiny pieces with toast. It was getting dark but they still were working.


This time they were working on desert.Again Gibbs worked on baking a cake with three stacks.The flavor he was using was strawberry and vanilla. The type of cake he was making was a tie dye cake.He is going to have butter cream that is also tie dye. The colors he is using is orange, blue and purple. He was going to use big and bright colors for his cake like blue, purple, yellow, and finally pink.Gibbs didn’t really want to use pink because it wasn’t his favorite, but he did it anyway. Abby was baking on cupcakes he favorite type of food in the world. The flavor she is going to use is carrot and peanut butter flavor. She is also going to use a carrot butter cream with a little bit of chocolate chips. The buttercream that she will be using for her peanut butter cupcakes are crushed peanuts mixed with the buttercream and put them on the cupcakes. Then she is going to add even more peanuts to give it that crunchier flavor. Leroy is going to bake the most important desert of all cookies, not just ordinary cookies but cookies that tell a story. The type of cookie he is going to make is a hard on the outside but soft in the inside. Leroy is not going to have buttercream, he is going to use so fondant to cut the inside of the cookie. So Leroy is going to work on the fondant and edible food dye. After the cookies were baked it was time for the best part decorating it. When it’s finished he is going to add a bit of white chocolate to give it some flavor. With only one hour lift they worked on the special details.


Gibbs managed to stack his cakes with the help of his friends until they got a call from F.B.I saying that there is a bomb in the building.So Gibbs yelled “everyone there is a bomb in the building we got to find it before the prime minister comes”. They looked everywhere but it still wasn’t there. With only five more minutes they got another call by the F.B.I and this time it was really big. The F.B.I said the bomb is going to set off in 1 minute. “Wait but the prime minister is coming in one minute” said Abby.”So we need to find it fast before it blows up the whole entire Restaurant” said Leroy.” Wait I think I know where it is” said Gibbs. “Hurry spill the beans before the bomb goes off” said Abby. “ She is right Gibbs it is going off in approximately twenty seconds” said Leroy. “ It's underneath the prime minister's chair” said Gibbs. They opened the chair but there was one problem Gibbs didn’t know which wire to cut, but there was one person in the room who knew and that was Abby. “ Abby hurry up it’s going in five seconds” said Gibbs. “Okay” said Abby. “ You guys got to hurry up the prime minister is coming in about two seconds” said Leroy.Abby quickly cut the blue wire as the prime minister walked in. Everyone’s fingers were cross as the bomb sit off. “Yes you did it Abby” said Gibbs.


As the prime minister walked in she said “ Oh what an interesting place to walk in”. “Oh your prime minister I am so so sorry we just set a bomb off” said Abby. “ A bomb oh what interesting I must hear it all” said the prime minister.As Abby began they started the feast.