Narrative Writing

Narrative Writing

WALT use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.

Your task: This term’s inquiry is all about working well as a team. Create a narrative/story. In your story, a group of children are going to get stranded on an island with nothing but a rope, a chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti. Tell the story of how the group got there and how they get off the island.








Planning:




Characters:Jason,Nicole,Aidin,Brie

Setting/ where:on a island that is in space

Problem: Stranded on an island with nothing but a rope, a chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti.

Resolution:they work together to find out

Write your story here:

“Come on guys” yelled the chief of astronaut’s. He was yelling to four teenager’s that did not like each other at all. They were on a mission to get a laser off the moon.While they were on there way to the rocket one of the teenagers Nicole asked “chief do we have to go?” The chief replied “yes Nicole”.Getting ready to go, Brie asked “why do we have a chilly bin, a rope and two cans of spaghetti?” Again the chief said “you will need it at some point.”Ready to go they blasted off into space.


While they were flying there was a problem with the gas. Brie talked Jason into doing it but he said no so Aidin just went.When Aidin came back he yelled ‘ everyone there is going to be a explodise in the rocket we only got five seconds to get off’.They all jumped off and was floating in the middle of space. Suddenly Jason saw the moon and yelled ‘ hey everyone I think thats the moon’.Brie said ‘ no way Jason it can’t be”.Nicole said “ come on guys let go on it”.


Finally they landed but something was missing. Aidin saw something floating in the middle of space. Aidin floated and got them. Then he asked “hey guys I found a rope, chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti. “Wait chief told me that we will need it some point” said Brie.”Wait we can use it but I’m doing my idea” said Brie. “Yuck I don’t want to work with any of yous said Nicole. “I’m taking the chilly bin” said Jason.” No I am” said Aidin. “Fine I am taking the spaghetti” said Aidin.”I am taking the other spaghetti” said Nicole. “I am taking the rope” said Brie. So they went out separate ways.


Nicole tried to see if the spaghetti when put on weight so she sinks down but it didn’t work. Aidin tried the same thing but that was a disaster.Brie tried to see how long the rope was but it was too short.Jason tried floating down to earth.Soon Jason just notice why there were there the first time.So he yelled “hey guys we have to find the laser”. ‘’Oh your right Jason” said Brie. “Come on let's go” said Nicole.They searched everywhere for the laser but justed can’t find it.”Wait probably there is no


So they put the two cans of spaghetti in the chilly bin and tied the rope around it. Suddenly Jason just remember that there was a button at the bottom that said press in emergency. So he said “ guys I just remember that there is a buttom at the bottom push it”.So Brie pushed it and it turned from a chilly bin into a medium sized rocket that they can fit in. So when they got in they went back to earth. When they landed the chief said “ so did you guys learn your listen”. Yes chief” they said. “ We learn to always work together as a team” said Aidin. “Yes we are better together” said Nicole. The chief laughed and said “ get some sleep chumps”.As chief said it they were already asleep.